This is my favorite chapter so far, and they keep getting better and better 🥹. Love the smooth shifts in tone and style as you write from the perspectives of different characters; kinda reminds me of Joyce’s Ulysses, but with a much more macroscopic lens. Clearly you meet a lot of different people and have lots of different experiences and wow it’s paying off.
Haha oh my God!
I just wish I was 13 again and read this instead of tolkien's lord of the sphincter. What a different place I would have been in now!
This is my favorite chapter so far, and they keep getting better and better 🥹. Love the smooth shifts in tone and style as you write from the perspectives of different characters; kinda reminds me of Joyce’s Ulysses, but with a much more macroscopic lens. Clearly you meet a lot of different people and have lots of different experiences and wow it’s paying off.