yoo really cool technique in this chapter! fwiw, the two lines near the end where they *perfected* the technique drew me out of it, felt like a lazy shortcut to mastery when there could be more tension if they just had to run it without certainty. this whole series is freaking awesome love to see how creative you are getting 🥏🏴☠️
yoo really cool technique in this chapter! fwiw, the two lines near the end where they *perfected* the technique drew me out of it, felt like a lazy shortcut to mastery when there could be more tension if they just had to run it without certainty. this whole series is freaking awesome love to see how creative you are getting 🥏🏴☠️
Thanks for the feedback I totally agree