I really like that the formatting makes it seem like the demon's voice is their voice ("But maybe it was no use. Maybe they deserved to be stuck in nightmare for what they had done to the world. Maybe–– no, that was the daemon speaking") while using italics and quotes for their actual thoughts. What a great way to convey the way their perception is being altered!
I really like that the formatting makes it seem like the demon's voice is their voice ("But maybe it was no use. Maybe they deserved to be stuck in nightmare for what they had done to the world. Maybe–– no, that was the daemon speaking") while using italics and quotes for their actual thoughts. What a great way to convey the way their perception is being altered!